[barcelona]

[ghost_racket]

Comments

[anonymous]

This is... very much the calm before the storm, isn't it? For all the conflict in the story itself, all of the tangles of emotion and confused loyalties... the real hell hasn't actually broken loose yet, has it?

Fascinating glimpse of things, regardless.

[amsterdam]

[anonymous]

thank you. yes, you're right, the hell is yet to come... i didn't have time to finish this before the deadline, so this is still a WIP. "orz

[barcelona]

[anonymous]

This is beautifully written. I'm usually not into OCs, but it feels as though Yui will get a nice characterization.

[sydney]

[anonymous]

thank you. this is the first time i'm using an oc so extensively, so i'm a little worried that she might turn out flat and become no more than a plot device. i'm glad that she seems alright so far. :)

[anonymous]

thank you. this is the first time i'm using an oc so extensively, so i'm a little worried that she might turn out flat and become no more than a plot device. i'm glad that she seems alright so far. :)

[barcelona]

[uminohikari]

The prose was nice and solid--it was a fun read! I must admit to not being particularly fond of the OC though >>

[uminohikari]

thank you. :3 glad you found it fun to read. the oc turned out more twisted than i thought she would be...

[barcelona]