[lakeplacid]

Sep 08, 2008 10:58

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anonymous October 9 2008, 20:16:26 UTC
This is a really nice look at taking opportunites as they come, and enjoying them while you can. Very nice.

[amsterdam]

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theprerogative November 2 2008, 13:59:59 UTC
I like the way you think <3 Opportunities come and go but these Hyoutei Boys know what they want and are not afraid to go get 'em >D I haven't written for POT in ages and this was birthed 2 days before deadline so many thanks for giving them and my terrible writing a chance!

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katherine_15 October 10 2008, 02:05:44 UTC
That was gorgeous. Your style is beautiful, and the whole fic had this air of wistfulness and longing. Aah. *adores*.

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theprerogative November 2 2008, 14:03:22 UTC
Thanks for giving the boys and my half assed writing a chance. You have no idea how much your comment meant when I checked back. Haven't written them in ages. This was a last minute attempt in a new style no less. I'm glad you liked it.

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uminohikari October 16 2008, 00:33:41 UTC
That was pretty! ♥ There are some characters I could not see the same way as you, but that's purely interpretation, so..

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theprerogative November 2 2008, 14:04:24 UTC
Thanks for reading <3 Which characters did you feel I mauled? Let me know I'm always anal about characterisation and will like to know what you think <3

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anonymous October 19 2008, 12:28:34 UTC
This is beautifully written. I love how you incorporated Carmen Fantasie into the plot and portrayed the dynamics at Hyotei. Very entertaining and real. Your Jirou is SO adorable.

[sydney]

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theprerogative November 2 2008, 14:07:24 UTC
Thanks for giving my writing a chance <3 I'm glad you enjoyed it, I was afraid nobody would D< The irony is your user name is the place I'm in now >D

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