[moscow]

Sep 13, 2008 11:06

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anonymous October 9 2008, 19:41:37 UTC
Hurray for them coming to their senses and finding their way back to each other!

And also for Inui's meddling with his beverages.

[amsterdam]

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sleepingfingers October 11 2008, 17:57:58 UTC
Oh, I love this, even though the beginning broke my heart because everything just seems to go so very very wrong. But it's nice to see that things pick up and there is the promise of things being better once they are together again. And, as a TezuRyo shipper, the ending had me grinning hard. :D (And of course, poor Kaidoh. XD)

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anonymous October 12 2008, 18:11:47 UTC
You lost me in a few places because of typos and such, but overall this was lovely. There are so many beautiful lines that just made me unable to stop reading. ♥

[nagano]

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uminohikari October 19 2008, 16:33:02 UTC
Some of the transitions could be smoother, but as a whole, this was lovely ♥

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anonymous October 27 2008, 07:03:19 UTC
The format of this story was interesting, and for an ensemble fic this encapsulated a lot of POVs very effectively!

[ampezzo]

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