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[wenlock]

Sep 23, 2008 11:31

Comments 7

anonymous October 9 2008, 17:36:32 UTC

This is a really interesting look at Yukimura--that he might step away from tennis for a time, and then find his way back again.

[amsterdam]

mayezinha October 9 2008, 21:14:05 UTC

An interesting setting, and more because of Yukimura's POV on things. It gives him more dimension as a character. Personally loved his sense of humor.
Thanks for sharing your work! :)

anonymous October 10 2008, 01:47:48 UTC

I can totally see Yukimura going back to tennis to feed that winning-hunger of his. And taking the rest of them with him.

[atlanta]

_sabriel October 10 2008, 04:00:46 UTC

I really like this. At 14-15 they think tennis is the sum of everything, but that idea won't last long. With Yukimura, he'd definitely go back to tennis again and again, and drag the others with him~

anonymous October 12 2008, 21:54:58 UTC

*grins* Yukimura just can't give up tennis.

I really like this; the ending doesn't resolve everything, but it takes the edge off the sadness of all that went wrong. That closing line is beautiful.

[nagano]