Yukimura rules ^__^ You've got all the characters down - even that little bit of Sanada's obvious grunt, retort, of "if you dare." is perfect. And my favorite part was:
He doesn't have a chance. I know he doesn't have a chance. I told him he doesn't have a chance. Yanagi told him, "You don't have a chance." He should very well know by now that he doesn't have a chance.
Your Yukimura voice reminds me of someone I know! You're making him a matchmaker, I see. Pity this wasn't written all the way to the conclusion--it would have been interesting to see how this panned out in the end!
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He doesn't have a chance. I know he doesn't have a chance. I told him he doesn't have a chance. Yanagi told him, "You don't have a chance." He should very well know by now that he doesn't have a chance.
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