Fanfic: East and West, part 2 of 2

[ghostfriendly]

Title: East and West, part 2 of 2
Characters: Riza, Roy, Dr Marco
Universe: Fullmetal Alchemist, first anime
Word Count: 2002
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Suicidal thoughts, PTSD, death, minor anime spoiler 
Summary: The conclusion of Riza Hawkeye's experience of Ishbal 
Notes: More Royai and less violence than the first part (link to 1st part here), hope you

Comments

[tagadachan]

Gosh, this story hooked me so easily. :) I have nothing particular to add, except that I enjoyed reading this quite much!

The pace of the story is just perfect, and everyone is so "in character", especially Riza. The way she watches for Roy and the way she considers his burden as hers are well analyzed here. :) Keep up the good work!

[ghostfriendly]

Thank you! I was worried the first part was too grim to be read; so really glad you liked this!

[ghostfriendly]

Thanks very much. I didn't have any experience to draw on for writing about combat PTSD, so I just tried generally to show that that Riza was in a bad place; its definately cannon that she couldn't go on if Roy died. Happy you read through this whole thing!