Oh dear, another one...

Apr 19, 2009 22:03

Title: Timeline
Pairing: France/Germany or Germany/France this doesn't make a difference to me :)
Summary: Thoughts and observations on a slowly growing friendship through time.
Author Note: Just a fast idea that has still three more dates to come before it is finished. I hope you enjoy reading and perhaps be so kind to leave a comment ~ ? And I ( Read more... )

fanfiction, historical, germany/france

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fanfaluche April 20 2009, 11:35:53 UTC
one word: D'AAAAAAAAW

I mean, I love how their relationship developed, their characterization, and all, Germany's clumsyness and.. everything.

And.. THERE'S EU <333333

Please, don't ever stop doing fluffy. It's too cute to say no.

Btw
Germany is visiting him more often for vacation and tries to learn his language (and he’s more into it than England ever was). <- This line made me giggle more than it should have. 8D

Feel guilty, I lost the first 15 minutes of a class to read this. J/K DON'T BE, I LOVE YOU.

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ghostwriter7 April 21 2009, 23:21:59 UTC
<3 Thanks!

EU took proper form in my head after I found your nice com :D. After that,she was/is always somewhere in the back,lurking around until I need her for some France/Germany-Parents fluff~

xD I liked it,too, when I wrote it! ...but I feel somehow bad for saying that about England ;;.

Gah,gomen! Although it makes me happy to know that you liked it that much ;D

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bubbole April 20 2009, 16:39:52 UTC
I just love how your write about these two~
Germany's insecurity and France's fears, they're so well described.

AND EU ♡ She's so awesome ahah~ lovely girl~!
Germany keeps reminding me of a puppy btw

Keep on going!

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ghostwriter7 April 21 2009, 23:28:47 UTC
Arigatou <3~
That's good to hear! 'Cause I always worry that I didn't give them enough depth to make it believable >.<.

Yes,just like her uncle East BD.
I think he somehow is,seeing that he lost his brother after war, had to find a new way for his nation and was pretty lost and alone until France came ~

Aye,sir :D!

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bubbole April 22 2009, 12:25:52 UTC
Aww don't worry~ they describe themselves on their own, more or less.
Next time don't forget uncle Spain! /dies

duhgffd I JUST THINK THE SAME, believe me, our ideas are alike.

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ghostwriter7 April 26 2009, 19:51:10 UTC
That makes me happy :D.
I'm trying to get him somewhere into the remaining last three parts!

I'm not the only one ;;? Gahh,those two will kill me in the near future because of their awesomeness xD.

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whak_hat April 20 2009, 16:42:22 UTC
oh I so love this pairing for all it's complexities. Thank you this was beautifully written.

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ghostwriter7 April 21 2009, 23:29:59 UTC
Me,too x3! But it's so rare ;;. Thank you for the nice comment!

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whak_hat April 23 2009, 01:48:15 UTC
noooo problem <3

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ghostwriter7 April 26 2009, 19:56:14 UTC
<3

I saw your Hetalia meme on the main page and woah, you can draw sooo good *__*!

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fyretoppaaa April 21 2009, 18:27:47 UTC
Oh my gosh, this is like everything I've ever wanted for this pairing all wrapped up in one fic. WWII and the aftermath and Gilbert and EU! And you have a gorgeous writing style--I spotted some grammar mistakes that could be smoothed out, but they didn't manage to detract from the overall amazing of the fic--and slfjl;ajlskjd this is so full of do want. Guh why is this pairing so adorable ffff ♥

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ghostwriter7 April 21 2009, 23:37:58 UTC
Awww,thank you <3!
I couldn't leave Gil out because I ship him and Ludwig to death seeing that he belongs to his brother and changed a great deal in France's and (West) Germany's relationship. And EU is just love ~
Ah,thanks :D. Damn me being German and always mixing German with English gramma and words X__x! I'm glad that it was still pleasurable to read,though.
Because they complete each other rather perfectly at least in my dream world... >///>

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sara_rojo May 24 2010, 00:13:12 UTC
This was absolutely perfect! It had layers, politics and history, kept true to the characters, addressed almost every issue between them in the present, and that end...! I'm such a huge fan of "France and Germany are EU's parents" ^^

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