This poem is for THE FISHER

[gibby_got_goose]

Poems need not depress
Depressed hords be damned
Self pity cast aside
Toss this mournful brand

When one sets adrift,
Leaks will spring for sure
But never is the case,
When digging is the cure

A JARV-MAN ORIGINAL

Comments

[justabunchabs]

nice poem nate =)

[stalefisher360]

Nice, I particularly like the final stanza. However, wouldn't you say that the tone of this poem wasn't exactly up beat? I mean digging might help him die a little faster, but not doing anything about the leak has doomed the boater bastard to sun burn and starvation, followed up by gulls picking the rubbery flesh away from what once was an optimistic man...Poor, crispy bastard.

I say dig with a fervor, bitch without cause and sink like a rock ;)

hmmmm....

[gibby_got_goose]

An interesting point of view to say the least... in response I will splash you with the rapidly rising waters. May salt get in your eyes.