BS: P/P: Adult: On The Necks Of Best Friends 6/6

Apr 13, 2009 03:20

Title: On The Necks Of Best Friends
Author: Gibson_fic
Fandom: Bandslash, Fall Out Boy
Characters/Pairing: Pete/Patrick
Rating: Adult for language and situations
Word Count: ~55,000
Disclaimer: This is a fictional story about characters based, in part, on the images and histories of real people. If that bothers you and/or you are one of those people, ( Read more... )

bandslash: fall out boy, fandom: bandslash, pairing: pete/patrick, universe: touching 'verse, rating: adult

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mokona_89 April 22 2009, 10:24:52 UTC
This. Is. Epic. \o/
I'm absolutely in love with you. I mean... Pete and Patrick, they take it slow, and that's just right. You describe it so damn well!
It's about love, innit?

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gibson_fic April 24 2009, 01:38:26 UTC
Thank you. :D

In love with me? Be in love with the boys! They're much more lovable. ;) I'm sort of incapable of writing stories where the characters are just, mysteriously, together. I have to explore how they got there. I treated as cannon and as a result, they had to take it slow. No one just jumps into gay sex. ;) Thanks for your comments. :D

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drunktuesdays April 22 2009, 11:11:27 UTC
You did a fantastic job of weaving and holding onto a story. I felt like Patrick was the voiceover narrator as they fell in love, you know? *approves*

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gibson_fic April 24 2009, 01:39:53 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad that it worked for you. I know it's not a style that everyone is going to like, but I'm glad that it worked for you. :D

Writing this was like having this Patrick pulling up a chair next to me and saying, "So, where did we leave off?" It was very organic in that way--I'm glad it translated into the story.

Thanks again.

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megyal April 23 2009, 18:10:22 UTC
Really a fantastic fic. I delighted in treating it like a chaptered fic, reading a bit every day so that my blasted short attention span would tighten up and truly enjoy the pacing; I like how it's set in Patrick's rambling headspace, and how they feel about each other is so clear and... and marvelous.

I think the part that resonated the most with me was where Pete was digging around in 'our' bag, and complaining that someone hadn't packed him a shirt. It was just such a near-domestic scene and I loved it so much.

Awesome work. *HUGS*

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gibson_fic April 24 2009, 01:41:10 UTC
Thank you m'dear. I'm glad you liked it, especially since theres just so much *more* of it since you saw it last! :D

I loved that scene too--Pete is an inch=a mile sort of dude. ;)

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. ~hugs you too~

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ribbonsonwrists April 23 2009, 18:17:13 UTC
have you ever read that fic so epic it keeps you awake til 4 am to read it all through?

that's this fic. it's so well written and thought out. it's not "PeteAndPatrick's Big Gay Fic" it's more the maturing and evolution of a relationship that's in defiance of societal norms, and i like and appreciate that a lot.

well done, lovely. ♥

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gibson_fic April 24 2009, 01:44:32 UTC
I have read fic like that! :D I didn't really expect mine to be that way for you though! I hope you've gotten some sleep. :D

I, clearly, believe in the Pete/Patrick, but I also believe that any relationship between them would be because of them, and not any inherent gayness. So, thank you very much for this: "it's not "PeteAndPatrick's Big Gay Fic" it's more the maturing and evolution of a relationship". :D

Thank you again. I'm so glad you've enjoyed it. :D

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citrus_vanille April 24 2009, 04:03:25 UTC
Wow, I loved this! I really like the style, and the pacing, and your characterizations. I boggled a bit at the word count, but reading it, it didn't feel that long at all, which is incredibly impressive, as far as I'm concerned.

Thanks so much for posting!

(I hope it's okay that I friended both your journals. It's fun to get to know new people. :D)

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gibson_fic April 24 2009, 04:55:26 UTC
Hi :).

Thanks so much for your comments :D. Trust me when I say, I boggled a bit a bit at the word count, so no worries there. I'm glad that you stuck with it and that it rang true for you. :D I'm glad you liked it, and the pacing. You wouldn't believe how much time I've spent angsting over things like that with this story, so it really does mean a lot. :D

You're very welcome. :)

(It's fine ;). I believe I've friended you back both places.)

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