BS: P/P (GEN): PG13: Fixing It

[gibson_fic]

Title: Fixing It
Author: Gibson_fic
Fandom: Bandslash, Fall Out Boy
Characters/Pairing: Pete/Patrick
Rating: PG-13 for language and situations
Word Count: 759
Disclaimer: This is a fictional story about characters based, in part, on the images and histories of real people. If that bothers you and/or you are one of those people, you probably don't want

Comments

[mrsquizzical]

ugh. this whole era is so ouchy. meep.

this is also very close to how i see this whole thing going down.

i completely loved 'then talk to me you fucking asshole'. you know that's how they share their feelings. for sure.

♥

some little typos i spotted:

Patrick knew, because Joe had told him, that they were sedating Pete, forcing him to sleeping.

and

and that he'd didn't fucking think he could talk to me first."

and

Patrick's voice broke and he didn't dknow

[gibson_fic]

THANK YOU!!! All corrected now. Transcribing handwritten stuff at 5AM when you're already stressed, not the world's best idea. ;)

It is a very ouchy era and that was part of why she wanted me to write about it. She says it's still not finished. They're still not "fixed." We'll see. ;)I'm a bit of a slave to her whims, sort of. ;)

Thank you, I'm glad that you liked it. :D

[barmy_bunk]

ow, ow, ow!

peeeeeete. not okay, pete. very, very bad, actually. *scowls at pete*

patrick. i ♥ you, patrick.

[gibson_fic]

I'm so glad that you liked it. :D

[maybeatdawn]

I read it, 2 times, and was hooked. I have no writing skills and cannot give any advice but I feel it's good.

[gibson_fic]

Thank you m'dear!!! I'm just so pleased that you tried to read it at all! :D Thank you! ~hugs you tightly~

This is just the sweetest thing ever to me. :D

[citrus_vanille]

This period is so hard to deal with, but I think you did a really great job with it.

(One more typo: Nice of you drop bye. should be 'Nice of you to drop by.')

[gibson_fic]

Thanks! It is a tough period, so thanks, I appreciate any and all words of support. :D

Also, thanks for the typos...I handwrite a lot of my stuff and transcribing it can be a bear when I'm already tired. ;)