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BS: Pete: Adult: On The Road Again

Sep 01, 2009 02:48

Title: On The Road Again
Author: gibson_fic
Fandom: Bandslash, Fall Out Boy
Characters: Pete
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 590
Warning: ( skip) Kink: Vehicular

Disclaimer: This is a fictional story about characters based, in part, on the images and histories of real people. If that bothers you and/or you are one of those people, you probably don't want to read ( Read more... )

character: pete wentz, challenges, kink: vehicular, fandom: bandslash, band: fall out boy, challenges: kink bingo, rating: adult

Comments 10

mrsquizzical September 1 2009, 09:56:50 UTC

that was lovely. very insular and sort of 'stuck inside his head' like i can really imagine pete being.

gibson_fic September 9 2009, 10:07:56 UTC

Thank you! I had this idea for this prompt a while ago and sort of forgot about it. Actually, the initial prompt was little more crack, but I really liked how it worked out in the end. Thanks :D.

here from kink bingo ext_198838 September 6 2009, 13:23:51 UTC

I've been reading all the vehicular prompt fics, and this is one of my favourites, i love the rhythm of this, the way it feels. Wonderful story

Re: here from kink bingo gibson_fic September 9 2009, 10:09:07 UTC

Thank you :).

This was actually one of the ficlets that I liked the most. I'm glad that you enjoyed it was well. :D

thingswithwings September 13 2009, 21:41:21 UTC

this is lovely! It's so sensual, and so quiet somehow: I love the idea of this being Pete's little ritual, between him and the bus. And this:

Eventually he can feel the road around him, in him; he is the road, is the bus, is the meeting of the two, and he's there in that moment, in that space where they meet and the whump, whump, whump of the tires is his heartbeat, drives through him, makes him hard.

. . . was beautiful. :)

gibson_fic September 19 2009, 00:06:25 UTC

Thank you! I really appreciate the feedback! :D

I was three-quarters asleep when I was working on this and while it made sense to me, I wasn't sure that it would stand up to anyone else. :D

There's actually another fic that has this basic premise but wanders off to a cracky place living in my head, but on the whole I think I like this one better. :D

Thanks again.

eruthros September 13 2009, 21:44:50 UTC

I loved this! It's such a beautiful and fully-realized exploration of the kink -- of Pete's bus experience.

gibson_fic September 19 2009, 00:07:10 UTC

Thank you! It was neat to have characters that live on a bus, it opened that prompt up for me in a way. :D I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I really liked it myself. :D

sasha_feather September 17 2009, 20:53:13 UTC

Nicely done! I like this.

gibson_fic September 19 2009, 00:07:25 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D