More Than Fiction, Less Than Truth

Mar 13, 2009 13:53

Title: More Than Fiction; Less Than Truth
Rating: PG
Words/Status: 7997, complete
Genre: Gen - Ellen pov
Warnings: Angst.  Shameless emotional manipulation. Het marriages and families abound.  That might be a warning in this fandom.
Pairing/Characters: Bill/Ellen, and Sam/Jo, with Bobby Singer; John, and Dean Winchester.
Notes: An AU for Ellen Harvelle ( Read more... )

fanfic: storytelling

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mimblexwimble March 15 2009, 17:25:20 UTC
Brilliant. Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant. Brilliant on so many levels. Reading the story, Ellen's feeling of love, safety - having Sam and Dean and Jo and Bill and everyone who matters right there with her - it just made me so happy. And then the reveal. It makes me ache so badly for Ellen.

She knows that Sam saved her life. All those years, all those dreams were Sam reaching out to her. He saved her life.

She tries not to hate him for it.

*whimpers* Thank you for this!

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gigglingkat March 16 2009, 02:07:09 UTC
I'm so glad people like it! I was a little afraid of getting too involved in a world that turns out not to be real, but it just seemed to be the only way to explain what a genie actually does to a person's mind.

But yeah - I do deliberately put things in that mean something different if you reread them. Thanks for the comment!!!

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azraelz_angel March 15 2009, 22:29:18 UTC
Fantastic. Heartbreaking and wonderful. Thank you for sharing.

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gigglingkat March 16 2009, 02:07:35 UTC
Thank you for commenting!!! ♥

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elanurel March 16 2009, 21:41:46 UTC
Wow. I don't even know how to tell you how much I loved this, between the way it leaves an ache and the way you've written Ellen's voice. Thank you so much.

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gigglingkat March 16 2009, 22:51:29 UTC
Thank you!!! I miss Ellen.

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flyingcarpet March 20 2009, 16:14:35 UTC
Wonderful job! I love the way she can hear Sam's voice throughout but doesn't know why. The last line is great, too.

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gigglingkat March 22 2009, 13:45:16 UTC
Thank you!

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norwich36 March 21 2009, 04:46:09 UTC
Oh, wow. I was not anticipating the ending at all, and it was a real punch to the gut. I loved this.

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gigglingkat March 22 2009, 13:49:12 UTC
Hee. If it makes you feel better, most of the people I showed the rough draft to all had a similar reaction. "Kaaaaaaaaaaaaaat!"

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