The Right Clothes. a gift for Jane Davitt, with thanks for her Sentinel fanfic Point of Contact

[gilded_kage]

I want the silk shirt

Comments

[thismaz]

So much poetry on the web is... not good. But that is lovely. The lyrics flow as they build the images, teasing at rhyme, but not falling into that trap (which would turn the rhythm to cliche).
Really nice.

[gilded_kage]

Thank you! I work very hard at avoiding cliche whenever possible.

[lomedet]

ooooh...that was lovely, and it made me go all shivery.

thank you for sharing it with the rest of us!

[gilded_kage]

You are so very welcome.