Noir Reveries

[gilded_orchid]

Noir Reveries: Part 1

Comments

[wicked3659]

*is intrigued* please continue :>

[gilded_orchid]

I have no intentions of letting this one die out. x_x;; I'm actually hammering away through the next chapter now...

[gilded_orchid]

Eep, thought I got those two! Well, it's adjusted now. ^_^

I totally appreciate the look out on styles. I'm still trying to look at other ways of writing this sucker too, and it's been a resounding fail. But hey, if it works, right? *looks at post, shudders, and keeps working on next chapter*

[prancingtiger86]

definitely intrigued and would love to see more of this :)

[gilded_orchid]

^_^ that's the intent! I have all faith that my insanity will see me through!

[gilded_orchid]

I spent a while tweaking this monstrosity, so that's a relief to hear! Thanks!

Mmmm........cookie coma........your bribery is effective. And...quite tasty...

[thepheonixqueen]

love this start! gives you the sam spade feel. gotta admit i'm curious as to what happened to prowl!

[gilded_orchid]

Thanks! I must have watched The Maltese Falcon a zillion times, and I was hoping some of that atmosphere leaked through. ^_^