Trinkets 2/?

[gilded_orchid]

Title: Trinkets 2

Comments

[thepheonixqueen]

Lovely job! Poor Jazz! His guild is gonna be paying for this for awhile, I suspect.

Wonderful job on the descriptions of the harmonium, it made it come alive for me and the details you provided were esquisite.

Bravo! Bravo!

[gilded_orchid]

Oh man, "paying for this" is putting it nicely. Why do you think so few musicians are left by the time things come to a head and war breaks out? Hint: It wasn't Megatron. :p

I'm glad you were able to get a clear feel of the architecture--it was a fun concept to indulge. ^__^

Thanks!

[fianna9]

I loved it. The shock and amusement with the change of gossip was great, and the drama was well done. I loved how Mirage and Tracks were not wanting to attract Jazz's anger. I kinda hope Smokescreen doesn't get any deeper, but I'm eager to see what Soundwave is up to and how it will all play out. You've done a great job so far, and I'm enjoying the ride.

[gilded_orchid]

To be fair, does anyone really want to attract that kind of anger? The "nice ones" always snap hardest, if not quickest. As for Soundwave...I'm by no means done with him. :) Thanks so much!

[whitefirebird]

Ooh. Start of true intrigue I see. Wonderful work. Looking forward to the next segment!

BTW: do you find this story is writing itself?

[gilded_orchid]

Hah! Writing itself? More like forcibly possessing all of my thought processes and demanding attention. I had all these notes I worked up for the prompts back in August, and I've maybe used...two of them. This deranged little tale is obviously captain of its own fate =_=;;

Well, I'm enjoying the ride, at least, and I'm glad you are too! Thanks!

[bluebirdsoaring]

What an amazing place Jazz lives in!! Why would anyone mess with drugs and risk being thrown out?? I did have to giggle about the beta blockers though. I fear Smokey is getting in way over his head! Glad Prowl is there to help Jazz out...he's knocking heads!!

Going forward with next year's music for the win!!

[gilded_orchid]

Smokey is so hosed and doesn't even know it yet. It'll be interesting to see what happens because *I* don't even know how he's going to come out on top yet. =_=

Might as well use the music--why go down without a fight? ^_^

Thanks for the read!

[purajo]

Stretch the prompts? I'd forgotten all about the prompts XD

This is captivating, and I'm looking forward to see where this goes. Plus angry!Jazz is always a bonus since he rarely ever gets righteously fragged off.

[gilded_orchid]

Oh man, it's getting to the point that I'm writing the story is writing itself, and I look at it and go, "oh crap, prompts!" and try to make it actually meet standards.

I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much!

(Angry!Jazz is fun, because you *know* he's gonna get creative about things...)

[purajo]

Hehehe... and when he gets creative, things tend to go BOOM in the most spectacular of ways...

In-control!Jazz is also fun to write cos he's got this crazy determination.