LJ Idol Week 2: Deconstruction

[gildedage]

“I always used to hate those idyllic pictures of people sitting on the grass, without blankets.” She remarked, lying prone on a blanket beneath a tree. “Because your ass always gets wet and you start to itch, and there are bugs.”

Comments

[gildedage]

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

[myrna_bird]

Beautiful. I like keeping it simple.

[gildedage]

Thanks!

[sherriola]

I loved this so much. You really made me see it all, made me feel like I was there

[gildedage]

Thanks! It was fun to write.

[pixiebelle]

This really was wonderful. I loved the conversation, and that last line really made me smile.

[gildedage]

Thanks! I am having a heck of a time ending stuff recently, and trying to get better at it.

[walkertxkitty]

I like this piece, but I wish the characters were more coherent. I had a hard time following their conversation and it feels like I'm missing background. It's a very good application of the topic, however. Well done.

[gildedage]

Thanks for reading!