FRAGMENTED - Fragment 11, Part 2

[gildeddiscourse]

A deafening wail of sirens and screeching tires tore through the scenery. The still of night broken, shattered, as the very mists swirled, receding, hiding away from the coming storm.

They swarmed the shipyard compound as insects upon a carcass, frantic, purposeful and numerous. Like a molten mass, writhing and all consuming, they swallowed whole

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[jaerin17]

For a second there, I though that the "body" the policemen found was Jaejoong's. But when I read that the blood was spilled on the cement, I realized that he wasn't. I got my hopes up though I already told myself that they wouldn't find Jaejoong yet. And the next that happened made me realized, if not yet how a sick devil Eien really is. I have this urge to run upstairs in my room, jump on my bed and wet my pillow with my tears. Oh heavens! I want them to find Jaejoong already, huhuhu!

"He was supposed to be there. You were supposed to find him! Why didn’t you find him?" And I feeling like crying again! But I'm glad that though Yunho felt like crumbling down, he didn't give up just yet. That's the spirit leader-sshi..! Find your Jaejoong!

But at least they're not back to zero. I have this hunch that that devil Eien is an ex-military too.

Sigh... Reading this part is too emotionally exhausting.

Sorry that I have to comment here again. I don't know when will I be able to read the next part so... yeah! ^_^