Comments | gildedmuse: Fic: Chemical Reaction

gildedmuse

Fic: Chemical Reaction

Nov 06, 2008 23:58

So, there is a deal, and this is it ( Read more... )

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jade_wynds December 19 2008, 21:12:39 UTC

I love the irony, and the implication that Billy created a superhero. You really got high school in general, and your characterization was spot on. There were a couple typos you may want to fix though...Most of them are understandable (should instead of shoulder and stuff like that) but I couldn't figure out this sentence: "Billy doesn't but into the whole high school." Even if you meant butt, it still doesn't make sense to me. Could you explain it?

gildedmuse December 20 2008, 03:58:03 UTC

I have no idea of what I meant, so I changed it to, "Billy doesn't get into the whole high school hierarchy." Yay for sense making!

Great job! anonymous December 20 2008, 16:08:47 UTC

One of my favorite Horrible fics, now. Thank you so much for writing!

Have you ever read 'Soon I Will Be Invincible'? Almost the same thing happens to Dr. Impossible...

This is awesome.

msmanuscript May 16 2009, 04:13:03 UTC

High school needs to die. True story.

Great fiction, very well written! Curious though, since Billy was next to the chemicals, wouldn't be gain the powers as well?

Young Billy is an awesome character, creating back stories for amazing people is so much fun. Well done! Going to do more vignettes of young Billy?