Chosen Chapter 1

[gilith_ramaloce]

This is a story I've been working on most of this past semester for my creative writing fiction class.  Loaded here for your enjoyment, sweetcakes!

Title: Chosen
Summary:  Chosen by a god no one worships.  A pawn in a power struggle between gods.  Sent on a perilous journey against his will.  Zithiar La'maask wishes for it all to end and is on a

Comments

[erisabesu]

Sweetcakes! *flushes* I assume you're talking to moi, and I LIKE IT. ♥♥♥

Oh I'm so glad you posted this! XD I love fantasy stories, and this was highly enjoyable!!! *squishes* I'm sorry I'm getting to this so late tonight--I promise to leave more in-depth comments tomorrow or Thursday. But! Suffice it to say that I'm intrigued with your Zithiar and Reyn (and hoping for slash goodness... but I'll risk being disappointed ^_~) and I do hope you've got plans to continue their story.

Hee! It's so cool to read something of yours for a change! XDDD

[gilith_ramaloce]

I await with anticipation for your more indepth comment. YAAAAY! I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT!!

I do plan on continuing it. And there is going to be two versions. The slash one, because that's the way it's supposed to be XD, and the non-slash because my parents are reading it and they don't approve of homosexuality. So. I promise you'll get to read all the slashy goodness though.

And yesh, I'm glad you get to read some of my stuff for a change though I do love reading your stuff. I'm hopefully going to convince myself to work on some longer fanfic pieces as well.

Can't wait to hear from you again!!!! -squishes-

[gilith_ramaloce]

Sweetcakes,
Have you heard of a publishing company called Foliolit in DC?

[erisabesu]

Hmm, no I don't think I have! Where'd you hear about it?!

And I do apologize about not getting back to your story this weekend. D: I will have some time tomorrow to catch up on things with a clear and focused brain. Promise! *kisses*

[erisabesu]

Hello again! XD I hope you've had a good day

[gilith_ramaloce]

-dies laughing- My god I love you. "my hentai mind keeps saying "it's obviously between Reyn's thighs" which just couldn't be right, could it???!!!!!" rofl. Sadly not; in fact I'm not sure what the object is yet. There will be slash, cause who can resist?!

Yes, this is what I'm looking for, so thank you! Some of your questions I will answer and others I won't cause it would give it away. ;p

Zithiar is the main character yes. His danger will become more apparent once his true identity is told. And with it, at some point, his vision explained as well. I'm so glad you love Reyn! I don't know how to slow this chapter down anymore, but I promise that the next segment won't be as clogged with info.

The funny thing is that in the original draft I did have a scene where Reyn was pondering the inconsitancies, and it's still somewhat there, but some of it got cut out cause it didn't fit to well. I will try and get myself to start crackin again!

My day was good, how was yours? Any chance of you coming on?