Laura Alone

Oct 27, 2008 07:41

“It would work out great for both of us. I can cook, all vegetarian meals - real healthy - and shop, and keep the yard up. You’ve got room for a garden back there. I could grow fresh tomatoes and beans, peppers and melons. The money you’d save on groceries would just about cover the rent you’re looking for.” A slow voiced, incense-permeated woman ( Read more... )

laura alone, laura alone part four

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remington_laura November 2 2008, 17:37:18 UTC
Sorry it took me so long to get to this...

I love it! It balances everything we know about Laura's past beautifully, and it's well-written, as always. The only suggestions I have are grammatical, and those you'll probably get yourself when you reread.

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