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August Entry: No Paradise

Aug 20, 2008 09:43

Title: No Paradise
Author: xmeredithxgreyx
Rating: T
Disclaimer: I don’t own Gilmore Girls. It all belongs to Amy Sherman-Palladino and the folks at the WB. Title comes from a song by Anti-Flag of the same name.
Summary: “Are you and Rory having sex?” Luke asked. “No,” Jess retorted, “we just enjoy undressing each other in the presence of ketchup and salt- ( Read more... )

august 2008, author: xmeredithxgreyx, claim: luke/jess

Comments 3

rm_jackson August 28 2008, 04:18:40 UTC

Sorry I didn't get around to it sooner here or on fanfiction.net, but I needed to tell you that I loved this fic! The Luke/Jess interaction is true to form, and I loved the condom buying and sock hanging. Great job. :D

xmeredithxgreyx August 30 2008, 15:37:42 UTC

Thank you! I wanted to start my claim out with something funny and very season-three-like. I'm glad you liked it.

lukecanwaltz88 September 1 2008, 16:42:10 UTC

I loved the Luke/Jess interaction. It was hysterical, in character, and I could see it happening. One nitpick, I think the implication was that Luke was a Yankees fan (you probably didn't mean it), but in the show he's actually a Red Sox fan... sorry, I just love the Red Sox and I was thrilled when Anna mentioned Luke liked them.

Anyway, I loved the sock bit. That was one of many parts I laughed out loud at. Thanks for sharing such a great piece with us! Can't wait to see your response for the next one!