An Antebellum Sunset *Chapter 1*Atsushi (Buck-Tick)/Uruha

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Comments

[black_fenrir]

This is a nice update, finally uru met atsushi~~~
fufufufufu uruha IZ beautiful, he can't refuse about that fact wekekkekekkekeke XD

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Uruha is too pretty for his own good. In all my fics it seems to get him into trouble. LOLZ

[black_fenrir]

wakakakakakakak
but i like ur uruha so damn much! <3333

[n3uromanc3r]

At first I found it strange that they call Atsushi Darcey, but actually I don't really know why I complain because it's understandable in that milieu you placed the story.

It seems that Mr. Sakurai easily enchanted the whole family with his mysterious presence! I can't wait for the next chapter!

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Yeah, I kept the last name 'cause it could pass for European I suppose but Atsushi is a distinctly Japanese name so I felt I had to change it.
I'm glad you liked this chapter an I'll try to get the naxt one written soon.

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Guilty pleasure!? I seem to have a knack for those. XD I hope the fic lives up to your expectations.

[watkins269]

im confused, does atsushi like marie or uruha?
very good so far please continue

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That is the question, isn't it? You'll see!

[paige_nevaeh]

Oooh, I think this is going to be very interesting...

Uruha collapsed.
“Oh! Bless his little heart. He’s fainted again.”

Hehe, that bit made me chuckle, can't wait to read the next chapters

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I couldn't resist the funnies. I think it's annoying when southern ladies say 'bless his/her/your heart' after they do or say something really mean as though that makes it all better.
Anyway, I'm glad I'm not boring you. Thanks so much for the comment.