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Fanfic: Rituals (PG-13)

Aug 31, 2006 17:53

Title: Rituals
Pairing: Tom Riddle/Ginny Weasley
Word Count: 1178
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Her lunch had always been connected with a number of little rituals.
Author's Notes: Written for fanfic100 and the prompt "Lunch". Rated for mild sexuality. Tense change is deliberate.

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freckles42 August 31 2006, 15:48:46 UTC

What an interesting concept. I like how this was written, especially as it gives us a good feel for the inside of Ginny's mind and her thought processes. I like the flow a lot. You've also captured Tom's attitude wonderfully, and I love that especially.

sublimeclarity August 31 2006, 21:07:05 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the flow -- I was a bit apprehensive about it in the second half of the story. Ginny is the character whose point of view I most often employ in fanfiction, because I find her mindset fairly easy to understand. Besides, her and Tom's behaviour in canon is tinged with sarcasm and pride -- Ginny's attitude being largely Tom-induced -- and that's something I'm familiar with. It's nice to hear my characterization is acceptable, as, apart from a couple of drabbles, this is my first T/G.

Once again, the review is highly appreciated. Your beta-reading experience comes through in all your observant and accurate comments. :)