Aww, thanks hon! This was the first fic I ever wrote - I think there's bits I'd do differently now, but there's also some bits I'm proud of - thanks for picking up on a couple!
This fandom made me start writing fanfic too. It's my secret, guilty pleasure.
This is really fantastic, I really like those last lines, full of promise. ;)
And this?
when bored, armed and quite possibly high, Sherlock doesn’t frighten him. He is irritated, yes, even exasperated, but fear? ...the thought that he doesn’t find Sherlock frightening is, itself, unsettling.
Lovely exploration of John and his evolving relationship with Sherlock. The metaphor of planets and dancers, as well the liminal space are apt and nicely handled here. I like the rhythm of the structure, how the sections vary in size in a way that seems natural. And that wonderfully ambiguous ending!
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and the paragraph about how everything has changed, lovely. dancers and planets.
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This is really fantastic, I really like those last lines, full of promise. ;)
And this?
when bored, armed and quite possibly high, Sherlock doesn’t frighten him. He is irritated, yes, even exasperated, but fear? ...the thought that he doesn’t find Sherlock frightening is, itself, unsettling.
That's a prompt in and of itself....
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And I got to come back and reread, so happiness all round!
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You may know these already, but here's Jackson Hill's setting of "Ma fin": http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6-NLeGUSMsU&feature=related
and Machuat's famous rondeau: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WLEmVxqye4g&feature=related
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