"Echoes of Always" - Luke/Mara - Chapter 12, April 6

Apr 06, 2012 14:42

Posting twice a week makes me nervous!!!  ;)

EoA 12 )

luke skywalker, l/m, nano, star wars, alternate universe, mara jade

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briannakin April 6 2012, 19:24:52 UTC
OH SHAVIT!!!!! MORE! MORE! MOREEEEEE!!!!!!!!

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ginchy April 9 2012, 15:29:33 UTC
ginchy has become evil in her use of cliffies!! muwhahahahaha. ;)

Thanks, lady!!

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katajanmaria April 6 2012, 20:22:12 UTC
OMG - good you're posting twice a week with that cliffie - heck post tomorrow - post NOW - I'm dying here!!! lol
“How do you always know to remind me?” he asked thickly, squeezing her hand.

What a chapter - again their intimacy, so fabulous - and plus that Byss, the reborn Emperor (probably - are you finally going to solve what he was?;-P) and an Ewok-joke?!??? You excel, lady!

“Remind you of what?”
“That I’m just a man,” he said with a smile. “Just a man.”
That was SO beautiful!!!

“Who needs the Force when you have fortune biscuits?”
And that was so SWEET!

I have to admit that it’s a little…weird…to see,” she said. “You don’t have any other strange mementos, do you, Farmboy? Toenail clippings? Belly button lint?”
His cheeks heated but he shook his head with a good natured smile. “Left those at home,” he said with a wink

And that was so THEM!!!

still dying here ;-P

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demendora April 6 2012, 20:49:04 UTC
Oh hell! Now they have to tell everything! What a mess))

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ginchy April 9 2012, 15:31:20 UTC
Don't die yet!! *hugs* I hope this will satisfy the curiosity for now!!

I'm so glad you enjoyed chapter 12. I was a bit concerned with some of it. I am just not so great at this plotting stuff, you know? LOL!!

And I love the 'just a man' line, too. <3 Thank you SO much, gal!!

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lotusflower85 April 7 2012, 15:18:01 UTC
As awkward as this moment is, I'm so happy Ben and Betrys have turned up - I really want to see how they react to Luke!

Loved the memories, and how Byss seems to be the turning point the 'our' Luke's galaxy which prolonged L/M getting together for so long. Makes so much sense.

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ginchy April 9 2012, 15:32:36 UTC
I love that icon of yours. Have I mentioned that??

Thank you, girl. I'm very attached to Betrys and knew she was going to meet Luke at some point. And Ben--how can Luke look at him and not long to get home to his son? I hope you'll like how this plays out.

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ginchy April 9 2012, 15:34:57 UTC
Thank you!! Yes, I soooo wanted Luke to have a daughter. I have a soft spot for those stories, too!! ;) (Updates, updates--what??? ;) Updates when you can... school work comes first. Yeah, that's it. hee!)

I always knew that Betrys and Ben would show up, even way back when they didn't have names and I could only vaguely see the outlines of the story in my mind. Betrys misses the father she got too little time with and Ben misses the father he only barely knew. And Luke would never have wanted that for his kids.

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jedi_lover88 April 9 2012, 14:37:32 UTC
You can't leave us at such a cliffhanger and not get up at 5AM on Monday and post the next chapter!! It is 10:30 AM and I am anxiously waiting for the next update. I have been waiting all weekend!!! MORE!!! I am going through withdraws!!!

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ginchy April 9 2012, 15:36:05 UTC
LOL!! Sorry, lady!! Didn't mean to leave you hanging. Work was NUTS this morning. I had to wait for my lunch break to post!! I hope you'll enjoy this update...

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jedi_lover88 April 9 2012, 16:18:01 UTC
Oh yeah! Very nice! Ben is a little snarky. LOL!

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