This is so sweet and lovely! I adore how you started off with Claire talking about her run in with Sawyer and then her realizing that Kate looks extra lovely. That seems very natural, and the reference to Miles and Richard was cool, and the way you described what Sawyer said was very him! <3 :) To think you once told me you didn't think you could write Sawyer well! Silly.
The interactions with Kate and Claire flow so well and seem really cute and natural. You did a great job! Glad you posted a new part. :)
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I love this story so much. It just seems in character and genuine, and the way they look at each other is just SO CUTE and *lesbian joy*.
You are awesome! :*
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Yesss for you! <3
And thank you, lovely. You are awesomer!
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Btw, I loved the reference "hippy, Dharma Initiative-y" ideas! :D I think they would totally use "Dharma" as code for "hippie" or "naïve".
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The interactions with Kate and Claire flow so well and seem really cute and natural. You did a great job! Glad you posted a new part. :)
Oh and I love your smiley Claire icon!
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