Fic Time! A Brief History of a Beautiful Friendship (Scorpius/Rose)

Jan 28, 2008 15:00



You came to know her as Rose the first day of first year Charms, when you heard her introduce herself to a nearby housemate. A while later, when she beat you to performing the perfect levitation spell on a piece of feather, you learned she was a Weasley, and you cursed yourself for missing all that red hair and freckles.

That’s when you ( Read more... )

fic, fluff, harrypotter, scorpius/rose, friends

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heartheflowers January 28 2008, 18:50:03 UTC
Adorable! I loved it, although it seems a little far-fetched that Rose would ask him to massage her while she's half-naked.

My favorites lines were these: “I think it would be beneficial for us to be allies. We’re both smart and we’re both from powerful families. But most importantly, we’re both good at Quidditch. It’s only logical to be allies instead of rivals.”

“Good grief, Malfoy!” She lowered her voice and gave you a teasing cock of an eyebrow, “is there a war going on that I should know of?”

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heartheflowers January 28 2008, 18:51:05 UTC
P.S. Your Neville icon has kept me laughing for 5 minutes...

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gingeraled January 29 2008, 01:43:29 UTC
Here's one more! You can find bazillions of Neville icons at the LJ community magicfly_icons. Sorry I can't make the clicky thing. :)

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gingeraled January 29 2008, 01:45:45 UTC
The massage scene is actually Rose's half-baked attempt at seduction. :)

And I enjoyed writing the scene where Scorpius proposes an "alliance." The banter just came naturally!

And of course, my beta duol2fic kept poking me in the right direction when she edited the dialogues.

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howcanthatbe January 28 2008, 18:50:26 UTC
very well done. I enjoyed the Scorpious perspective and the playfulness and just the right amount of angst for a one shot.

I especially liked:
"Her eyes flutter shut but you force yours to stay open just so you have all five of your senses documenting the fact that you are finally kissing Rose Weasley"

very sweet. almost Ron-like or the thoughts one imagined for from Ron during Ron & Hermione's first kiss.

I think what I like about R/S is the possibility that a new generation has begun to move on and break the old patterns. That the feuds of the past may be over juts as the war finally is.. It has such optimism. To that end, I do enjoy that it doesnt get too Romeo and Juliet. That is what is great about QueenBs Now or Never-- we see the impact of the romance not as this familial conflict but more as the stirring up of painful past memories-- it is personal not political.

Good Job! A wonderful gift.

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gingeraled January 29 2008, 02:00:10 UTC
I love your review! It's so glowy and smart!

There's just something about the first kiss between best mates. It's never happened to me, but I'm imagining that it would feel like fireworks, and coming home after a long journey, all at the same time. *sighs*

*nods to your Now or Never insights*

Shannon is magnificent that she has avoided the trap of making this Romeo and Juliet-ish. I was actually expecting the story to unfold that way, the Weasleys vs the Malfoys and the lovers in between. But I was pleasantly surprised at how Now or Never is treading the gray area of the personal battle in the context of the bitter past

*crosses fingers* I do hope Shannon likes this.

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pop_the_toaster January 28 2008, 20:46:40 UTC
oh wow, this was the most beautiful scorpius/rose fic i have EVER read, and hurray! scorp's in ravenclaw, so pleased to finally read him in that house you characterization was perfect, and so is your writing, lookign forward to whatever more you may write...soon pleeease! :D

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gingeraled January 29 2008, 01:50:06 UTC
What? You haven't read queenb23more's Now or Never? Read that story and see my little ficlet die in comparison! :D

But thanks for that glowing review. I'm so glad that you liked the characters as written by me. :)

I don't write that much fanfic, I'm primarily a beta, but my stuff's archived at The Quidditch Pitch, if you're interested. (DID I JUST PIMP MYSELF? *dies*)

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pop_the_toaster January 29 2008, 07:30:38 UTC
okayokay, yours is the most beautiful scorpius/rose ficLET i have EVER read. I am currently reading Now or Never but also slowly dying of impatience for No.13! lol
yeh, you go pimp yourself, i shall check it out!!any other scor/rose recs? seeing as your a beta?!

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gingeraled January 29 2008, 07:40:53 UTC
psst... Now or Never Chap. 13 is here.

I'm not that aware of other Scorpius/Rose fics. Are you partial to slash? Because I do have some AS/S in mind. (Don't kill me!)

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sportsfan25 January 28 2008, 22:01:21 UTC
What a sweet story! I love the R/S ship, and this story is a wonderful addition to the fan fiction that already exists. Great job!

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gingeraled January 29 2008, 01:51:27 UTC
I love the ship, too! And ZOMG I love your icon!

Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed!

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duol2fic January 29 2008, 00:50:55 UTC
:D! ♥ You're adorable.

I don't think I said this enough in my emails to you...but they're so cute! Theirloveissoreal, oh yeah it is! Wonderful job.

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gingeraled January 29 2008, 01:54:03 UTC
I've forgotten how to make that heart thingy. But I heart you. You poked me in all the right directions and made the whole story infinitely better.

Now I urge you to read queenb23more's epic Now or Never. Come on, I know you've always got time to waste. LOL.

Thanks so much! *hugs*

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duol2fic January 29 2008, 04:42:20 UTC
Heheh, you put &_hearts; only, without the underscore and no space. o_O;;

I totally do. And I just did. Gwahaha! So cute, so incredibly cute!

No problem! :)

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gingeraled January 29 2008, 05:03:50 UTC
♥ ! FTW!

I love Now or Never!

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