What's Missing? You know that "special" Valentine's Day you always want?

Mar 15, 2012 03:02

Dishes clamor on the counter...something crashes on the kitchen table...her eyes flash open - she's awake, yet unmoved...it's 4:00 a.m ( Read more... )

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gingergirlslove February 16 2012, 07:33:10 UTC
Thank you! I look forward to it...

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superfan1 February 15 2012, 12:19:12 UTC
Very well done fantastically and awesomely great story! I hope you had a nice V-day sweetie! <3

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gingergirlslove February 16 2012, 07:29:15 UTC
Thank you so much! I did have an okay V-Day. Not "romantic" but okay. I'm single...FOR NOW!!! LOL

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basric February 15 2012, 13:25:08 UTC
A nail biter, well written.

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gingergirlslove February 16 2012, 07:27:38 UTC
Thank you!

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yuniebaby February 17 2012, 06:34:40 UTC
This was a great read. You did a really nice job keeping the tension up throughout the piece.

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gingergirlslove February 18 2012, 07:08:34 UTC
Thank you, I was hoping the tension would last all the way through..,I was afraid I would lose some as I was writing her memories of him...so I just kept interfacing the present day, thanks again!

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solstice_singer February 17 2012, 13:13:09 UTC
I did enjoy this. I was on the edge of my seat, waiting to see who was invading her house, and if she would actually have the nerve to kill. Very, very nicely done.

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gingergirlslove February 18 2012, 07:06:47 UTC
Thank you SO much! I was beginning to wander if I went to far...lol...I wasn't getting any comments there for a bit...

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