Dishes clamor on the counter...something crashes on the kitchen table...her eyes flash open - she's awake, yet unmoved...it's 4:00 a.m
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Thank you, I was hoping the tension would last all the way through..,I was afraid I would lose some as I was writing her memories of him...so I just kept interfacing the present day, thanks again!
I did enjoy this. I was on the edge of my seat, waiting to see who was invading her house, and if she would actually have the nerve to kill. Very, very nicely done.
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