The Sitting Inside (s/a)

Sep 09, 2008 23:48

The Sitting Inside
Ryan/Brendon
729 words

the fragile set of the sitting inside )

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starlesscities September 10 2008, 20:22:13 UTC
This was enchanting and amazing and heart wrenching.

<3

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rock_my_town September 10 2008, 22:45:30 UTC
this was beautifully descriptive and i loved the line It’s always the little things. That sums up so much in such a short phrase. Great work♥

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xbe_reasonablex September 10 2008, 23:38:30 UTC
Wow.
That's absolutely beautiful...your writing is amazing. The descriptions and the imagery is just...breathtaking.
<333

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hitchedtoastar September 11 2008, 13:47:19 UTC
that was absolutely gorgeous. your imagery is incredible. the fact that it's shorter means nothing when you capture that much beauty in under 800 words. ♥

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hitchedtoastar September 11 2008, 13:48:46 UTC
the result of innumerable years spent breathing in each other’s lungs, bus windows open, Brendon shouting obscenities at the sun, Ryan curling up in a curve at his ankles.

i think this part was my favorite. that stole my breath, for a second or two.

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novalinedy September 11 2008, 16:14:52 UTC
i liked this a lot!

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