Comments | ginryuu_souhi: An Autumn Journey

ginryuu_souhi

An Autumn Journey - Freeverse Poem

Mar 02, 2008 15:27

I'll admit, I was really amused with the sub-title at
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meicdon13 March 2 2008, 10:49:53 UTC

LJ cuts are simple. If you're writing entries in HTML-mode, all you have to do is type this:

< lj-cut text="whatever you want" > random text < /lj-cut >

Just remove the spaces after the < and before the >

ginryuu_souhi March 3 2008, 12:04:36 UTC

Hmm okay, that's what I read at the help section, somehow it wasn't working when I tried it. O_o Whatever, I'll just give it another try.

Thanks for the help~! ^__^

Um, what do I write here? o_O anonymous March 2 2008, 17:53:13 UTC

Ahahahaha... I loved the last line, so out of place and yet so cool! I mean, the whole poem is sorta beautiful and confused state of mind... and suddenly THAT line comes up! Hilarious, loved it :D
As for the rest of it, pretty short one, eh? Though, I have read stuff along the same lines many times, but the last para sets yours apart... absolutely. ^__~

MannC ( I don't remember if I have an account here -sigh- )

Re: Um, what do I write here? o_O ginryuu_souhi March 3 2008, 12:09:22 UTC

Hahah, I know I was being too sudden with those last three lines, but from all the haiku/senryuu I've read, it still seemed kinda okay to me. Great you liked it-- you really write them awesome, and it's cool to get a praise from you~! ( ...even though I know you won't just not compliment, lol )

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ginryuu_souhi March 3 2008, 12:13:24 UTC

Lol, yes, I definitely remembered Toy Story, but I didn't have an idea about Firefly ( haven't watched it yet ). Personifying a leaf was a bit freaky for me in itself. xD Well, thanks for the comment, though~ I really loved the layout you had, and now, it motivated me to write something, haha.