I've read some of your poems from several weeks and I really enjoyed them. The poem for this week in particular is especially good because you were able to imagine the scenery/setting so well. I relly liked the second stanza where the old voices call out to comfort the people; kind of like one of the characters in 'The Tempest' (Caliban act 3:2 , line 130-138) who can hear the music in air of the universe. Also your last line topped it all off- well done! Nancy
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I've read some of your poems from several weeks and I really enjoyed them. The poem for this week in particular is especially good because you were able to imagine the scenery/setting so well. I relly liked the second stanza where the old voices call out to comfort the people; kind of like one of the characters in 'The Tempest' (Caliban act 3:2 , line 130-138) who can hear the music in air of the universe. Also your last line topped it all off- well done!
Nancy
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