The Mohawk: Kurt, Puck (1/1)

[giraffedinosaur]

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Title: The Mohawk - (1/1)
Author: giraffedinosaur 
Pairing: None. Kurt/Puck friendship.
Summary: “The thing that bothers me isn’t that this is Hummel’s diary. It’s that the more they read, the more I want to do shit. ‘Cause, yeah, Hummel’s gay, but that doesn’t mean he deserves to die.” Pre-Jocks join Glee. Depressed!Kurt
Rating: T
Warnings: Angst. Foul language

Comments

[nikkisait]

uhm okay.
this was GORGEOUS.
all i can say is, if you were like "i could see the marks on his neck that the scarf didn't hide" instead of being supervague right there it would make it that bit more poignant.

[giraffedinosaur]

=D Made that change.
And gorgeous? Why thank you.

[rabidpandabear]

Wow. I personally hate first person (unless its written like a diary) But I'll make an exception. That was amazing. I loved this.

[giraffedinosaur]

Thank you =)
I normally don't like first person either, but I didn't want this to be second person (which was where my head was leaning).

[chee17]

This was lovely. An awesome twist/backstory of why Puck, Mike and Matt joined Glee. Nice job. :)

[giraffedinosaur]

Thank you

[anonymous]

That was heartbreaking... you caught a really interesting side of Puck. So well written. Loved it

[giraffedinosaur]

I think this Puck is one there should be more of on the show. A bit of emotion isn't a bad thing. =)
Thank you for reviewing.

[podicus]

I really like this! Beautifully written, and such a good idea for why they joined the glee club. I for one would definitely like to see more from you.

[giraffedinosaur]

Why thank you.
I have some other things I'm writing/have written and will be posting. If you want, you can check out the first post on my journal for an archive, or author alert me on FF.net (same name there).