fic: think lovely, wonderful thoughts (2/2)

Jan 24, 2012 20:15

title: Think lovely, wonderful thoughts
author: girl_in_stripes
rating: PG
pairing: harry styles/louis tomlinson
disclaimer: I own/have no affiliation with any of the boys, and Peter Pan belongs to J.M. Barrie and the various creative executives who have had permission to use him after her.
summary: His favorite of these stories, the one he loved like it had been ( Read more... )

pairing; harry/louis, fandom; xfactor

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arsenal4ever January 25 2012, 02:30:44 UTC
This is the most beautiful piece I have read in an extremely long time, and I don't mean just fanfiction. I am an avid reader, and have always had the softest spot for Peter Pan - and i mean that I would say along with Harry Potter it is my all time favourite book. And this just touched my heart. It was perfect in every sense of the word, and has my eyes feeling with tears ... but unlike when I read Peter Pan, the tears didn't shed ... and that is because where Peter Pan ends, this carried on. Carried on to the perfect end, the end that Wendy and Peter never had. So I would just like to thank you for that :)

You are incredible.

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arsenal4ever January 25 2012, 02:32:35 UTC
ALSO: The relationship between Harry and his Mum - outstanding, so beautiful, and so perfect.

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girl_in_stripes February 5 2012, 01:42:29 UTC
This means so much to me, you have absolutely no idea. I'd completely forgotten my love of peter pan until I started writing this and dived back into the books and the various film adaptions and to hear someone who has loved it for so long say that they liked how I took it means absolutely so much to me.

Thank you so much for commenting, and reading, and just being lovely. Thank you so much.

<3

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wickedlovely69 January 25 2012, 02:32:36 UTC
I loved this! It was really well written, and while reading it I couldn't help but smile. Good job!

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girl_in_stripes February 5 2012, 01:42:47 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm so glad it made you smile! <3

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girl_in_stripes February 5 2012, 01:43:50 UTC
I'm really really glad you liked this! And seriously, Louis is the most Peter Pan. Every time I see a picture of him I can't help but think of him as Peter, it's actually gotten ridiculous.

Thanks so much for reading, I'm glad you liked it! <3

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laffes January 25 2012, 02:45:39 UTC
I love this so much, especially your soft, dreamy, idealistic voice. So lovely :) ♥

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girl_in_stripes February 5 2012, 01:44:45 UTC
Oh gosh, I'm so glad you found the voice okay- I worry so much when I write like that, because while it's nothing special, it's very different for me to write in, so it's always so nice when people like it.

Thank you so much for reading, and commenting- it really means a lot!

<3

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aimmyarrowshigh January 25 2012, 05:14:06 UTC
Oh, oh, oh. I am such a sucker for Peter Pan stories, and oh gosh, Louis fits that bill so perfectly I can't believe no one's written it before now! But I'm so glad they hadn't, because this is really, really beautiful.

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girl_in_stripes February 5 2012, 01:45:59 UTC
Oh my gosh, thank you so much! And yeah, I've always thought of Louis as Peter Pan, even before I really knew who the band was- everytime I saw a picture of him, he just reminded me of Peter.

I'm so glad you liked this! It means a lot <3

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