looks pretty solid, i only caught two typos. dunno if youve already turned it in, but i think it would be cool to introduce chris with his full name and later refer to him as private anderson, just to emphasize the transition people make when the becoming a soldier. although over all it feels like youre inadvertantly connecting iraq and 9/11 at the hip. which is exactly what so outrageous about the whole thing in the first place. no connections, no ties, just terrorism with a bigger budget.
aw already turned it in, but i like the private anderson idea. damn.. oh and i had to make the connection to 9/11 for the paper, although i totally agree with you. no connection. so fucking ridiculous.
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although over all it feels like youre inadvertantly connecting iraq and 9/11 at the hip. which is exactly what so outrageous about the whole thing in the first place. no connections, no ties, just terrorism with a bigger budget.
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oh and i had to make the connection to 9/11 for the paper, although i totally agree with you. no connection. so fucking ridiculous.
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