Comments | girl_tarte: a little silhouetto of a man (lupin/snape)

girl_tarte

a little silhouetto of a man (lupin/snape)

Aug 29, 2010 22:26

words: 2000ish
rating: PG-13
summary: marauders era. some shit is about to go down in the shrieking shack. in the meantime, this is in the manner of a deleted scene (or two), i guess.

note: it's disingenuous to say that this was written on the occasion of the 30th birthday of my lovely friend secrethappiness, since that was about a month ago now, but that was ( Read more... )

Comments 17

secrethappiness September 1 2010, 05:49:03 UTC

first of all, i'm sorry for taking so long to read this. i've had the tab open since sunday but i've only just now had the chance to read it.

that being said, oh tarte. i love everything about this fic. the imagery and the way you show that they're all right on the edge, stretched thin and full of emotion. and yeah, knowing what comes next gives this such an ominous feeling. thank you my love.

girl_tarte September 1 2010, 17:37:40 UTC

hey, no sorries necessary - this was written entirely without obligation, given a) how late it is, and b) how anachronistic it is in fandom terms. :)

and - that being said... yay! i am so glad you enjoyed it. \o/ (happy birthday again, your face!)

valis2 September 4 2010, 21:28:14 UTC

Absolutely amazing, as your work always is. You are an incredible talent, and this is so vivid and visceral, and the details so stunning and lifelike. Absolutely amazing. I've said it again because it's so true. This is wonderful and thank you so much for sharing it with us!

girl_tarte September 9 2010, 17:32:05 UTC

i'm sorry i am so slow replying to this lovely comment. you have always been so kind and enthusiastic about the snupin fic i've written. it's really flattering and it means a lot to me that you like it. thank you! :)

osmalic September 9 2010, 11:21:11 UTC

This is beautiful. I love how you captured the boys at their age during that time. The music, the weed, the languid feel but with an underlying murky emotion. And oh, how it will end after. This is short but COMPLETE in everything, from words to emotions, all of which I love. Thank you for sharing.

girl_tarte September 9 2010, 17:36:21 UTC

wow. thank you so much - this is a lovely comment for such a short fic!

oh, how it will end after

i know! i love that about reading canon-era fics - there's so much to be got out of the fact that we, the reader, have a burden of knowledge that the characters don't.

fatairuq April 6 2015, 11:16:24 UTC

This was good. Sirius was hilarious, Remus and Severus were so IC. I love how you focused on the actions especially the kind that show so much about the characters