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A Niggle In His Tranquility

Mar 22, 2011 17:06

Title: A Niggle In His Tranquility
Author: girldevil
Pairing: yoosu/junchun
Genre: fluff
Rating: pg
Length: one shot
Summary: Yoochun finds peace in an odd place, a busy cafe where none can bother him until someone unintentionally did.

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fic:, fic: a niggle in his tranquility, fanfiction, yoosu, dbsk

Comments 37

kameo_pon March 22 2011, 13:12:47 UTC

it was a really great story. i loved to read it.thanks for sharing

girldevil March 22 2011, 14:30:26 UTC

Glad you liked it!

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! ^.^

unexpectedsa March 22 2011, 13:56:18 UTC

this was really well written. and go junsu with his frwardness and jaejae with his threats hehe :p
i like how junsu breaks thru chunnies concentration.

and it works both ways for yoosu and junchun :)

girldevil March 22 2011, 14:31:37 UTC

Aww *blushes* I try my best to write well and glad you are satisfied with it.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment, I really appreciate it! ^.^

awshin March 22 2011, 14:26:08 UTC

Haha, you waited in starbucks for so long? I don't think i can sit alone at a cafe for too long, afraid of being chased out. xD Thank you for writing this though!

girldevil March 22 2011, 14:32:57 UTC

Yeah I waited that long! Lol nah, you can't be chased out if you ordered a drink from them. And while I waited, my coffee had gone cold lol.

Thank you so much for reading! ^.^

ting5 March 22 2011, 19:00:06 UTC

I'm glad Junsu is the one who 'disturbed' Yoochun =) Yeah Junsu is the one that made the first move ne, but still he has the hint of innocence around him. So to me it's still more Yoosu but a slightly different and refreshing kind /grins

girldevil March 23 2011, 01:58:34 UTC

Ah really? Hmmm...I still fail as a writer, I need to form a person's character completely and portray him as how I want him to be. But glad it still turned out well!

Thank you so much for reading! ^.^

ting5 March 24 2011, 13:05:36 UTC

You're already a good one and people always say practice makes perfect ne :)

mimz_song March 22 2011, 19:57:36 UTC

hahah I loved this XDDD It was so cute hahaha
Lulz Suuuu~ XDDD
I love Chun's "reader/writer critic" hobby/profession 8DDDD

girldevil March 23 2011, 01:59:55 UTC

I wished I could be a reader/writer critic in real life, it makes your life so easy and you don't have to do desk jobs either.

Glad you enjoyed the fic!

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! ^.^