Drabble One - Falling in step (Blood+, Saya/Solomon, Theme #26)

[girldisturbed13]

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[minitsu]

Oh that was beautiful! ;_;/

If it's alright, to add this: The line, "Saya... desu ka?" kind of breaks the flow of the whole thing. I think it would be better to stick to english, but maybe that's just me...

In any case, I can't wait to read your future drabbles!!! :D

[girldisturbed13]

Hmm...I had a tough time deciding between 'desu ka' or 'huh' since remembering Solomon say it was sooo *starry eyed* he has such a beautiful voice ne? *rueful grin* Gomen for going fangirly on you demo its hard to decide. I edited it as you can see *points up*. I tried huh but it doesn't add up so I simply erased it. ^.^

And Arigato for the compliment minitsu-san!

[trickyfrog]

Thanks you for sharing this. I agree with the change, its good. ^.~

[girldisturbed13]

Your welcome and arigato for the comment^^

[anime_goddess_s]

Yay, I finally had time to read this and I must say that I love this!! ^_^ Seriously, you go girl!!

Characterization was purrfect and I love the way you described Solomon's inner thoughts. *squeal* I can't wait to read some more drabbles.

[girldisturbed13]

gah! *stares at her sesshoumaru icon* ZOMG angsty hotness XXDDD *glomps* thanks Maya-chan!

[chaos_gate]

sayaxsolomon drabble! can't wait for more

imo, i thought solomon was a little mean at first; a little ooc, but as it went on... <3

[never_chan]

*randomly walks in from that wonderful community you have going* (which I will post something eventually...)

eeeeeee! *stroke screen* tis so pretty and Saya/Solomon! :heart: and very well written too - please write more!

[girldisturbed13]

*laughs* Domo arigatou desu!