Fic: Touch, Part One

[girlpire]

Title: Touch (Part One)
Author: girlpire
Rating: NC17/FRAO
Pairings: Angel/OFC (this part) and Angel/Spike
Disclaimer: This story is based on the "Angel" series, with which I am not affiliated in any way. Joss Whedon is my master, etc.
Distribution: Please do not archive this story anywhere.
Warnings: This part: sexual themes. "Touch" is primarily

Comments

[hello_spikey]

Oh and adding - I /love/ all the sensual details there - you got me fantasizing about the whole cast! :D

[girlpire]

ha, well, good. they're a bunch of smexy people. :)

[mofetash]

uh-oh! whatever will Spike when he finds Angel as surely he must whew

[girlpire]

you'll see in part two! :)

[mithril_56]

That was hawt! I especially loved the parts where Angel and spike are watching each other, and where angel is enjoying being watched. I love it when he skirts the line between the champion and bad boy, and I especially love it when it's the other bad boy is right there with him. Great start - can't wait for more (I *love* my porn with a plot and this feels like the start of a good one!)

[girlpire]

thanks! my angel is an exhibitionist like whoa. :D the plot is actually only here to facilitate the porn, so i hope you aren't disappointed when it's not very deep. it's pretty much your basic baddie-of-the-week.

[mithril_56]

oh no, not disappointed at all. In fact I just reread it and am counting the days until the 18th. I can't wait to see Angel's demon-drug-induced (just a guess here) passionate intensity focused on Spike! Oh yeah, and I definitely see Angel as an exhibitionist too :)

[cafedemonde]

What a scene! Angel is all fucked up and too fucked up to know it. And Spike is hot with the staring and knowing Angel's on the egde of something, but not what. Or maybe he does know and didn't show up for the beastie thing on purpose.

Poor Lana, hope he stops before draining her. Then again, poor Angel. When this is over he'll be so guilty he might just go back to rats blood.

You never fail to dazzle. Can't wait to read what happens next.

[mithril_56]

I'm betting spike has followed and steps in to rescue Angel the girl just in time. yay!

[girlpire]

haha, wait a second, spoilers! :P

[girlpire]

thanks! i had fun writing this part. i know the whole "spike and angel go to a dance club" thing is one of our fandom's tropes - or at least it used to be - but i've sort of always wanted to try my hand at it. it was just a matter of getting angel messed up enough to actually want to go there. :D

[angelstoy]

HOLY FUCKING *GUH*!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TOTALLY CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[girlpire]

glad you're enjoying it. and OMG your icon! O.O