Loved the intro! :D It's so interesting! :) And a bit scary at the same time :/ That stupid Trey! All because he couldn't pick her up, she was kidnapped :( I can't wait for the first chapter! :3 I'm sure to keep an eye on this story! :)
Awesome intro! Looking at the GP Drama Productions pic at the end there brought back memories :)
I love how Jasmine dressed as Jasmine for halloween too, I know too many 8 year olds who do that...
I blame her parents. Trey didn't pick her up, sure, but they let her out of the house like that, without even caring about where she was going, who she was going with, when she'd be back, and that she would or would not have her phone. Clearly her parents need to be better educated on city safety. It's a realllllllly big thing over here.
Critical view of her parents aside, it was awesome :) The problem with the Drama series is that yu get hooked :D
Thanks! There are so many people to blame. This isn't all about Jess. I'm hoping to do a chapter from everyone's point of view. I followed Jess here. The next one I'm thinking of following either Raven or Jed.
Uh...Not sure what to make of this. You've done an awful lot of kidnap stories and not all of them have been that good. I just hope this one is as good as some of your very first stories, like the one with Malady Rose. :)
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It's so interesting! :) And a bit scary at the same time :/ That stupid Trey! All because he couldn't pick her up, she was kidnapped :( I can't wait for the first chapter! :3 I'm sure to keep an eye on this story! :)
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I love how Jasmine dressed as Jasmine for halloween too, I know too many 8 year olds who do that...
I blame her parents. Trey didn't pick her up, sure, but they let her out of the house like that, without even caring about where she was going, who she was going with, when she'd be back, and that she would or would not have her phone. Clearly her parents need to be better educated on city safety. It's a realllllllly big thing over here.
Critical view of her parents aside, it was awesome :) The problem with the Drama series is that yu get hooked :D
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I followed Jess here. The next one I'm thinking of following either Raven or Jed.
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I just hope this one is as good as some of your very first stories, like the one with Malady Rose. :)
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