Fic: Season of Mists (Supernatural) [1/1]

[girlupnorth]

Author: girlupnorth
Pairings: Castiel/Ruby
Rating: strong R
Length: ~3,400 words
Spoilers: including 4.10 Heaven & Hell; takes place between 4.4 and 4.9
Warnings: blasphemy, light bdsm
Credit where credit's due: I'd say it's all novin_ha's fault, but really it's about 50/50, and the theology's all mine

Comments

[novin_ha]

ILU.

I jeszcze napiszę taki dłuuugi komentarz, w którym powtórzę każdy jeden squee, który Ci już zostawiłam na gg, ale to później.

Na razie... Dance of uncontained joy.

(It isn't good enough, it's fucking brilliant.)

[girlupnorth]

\o/

comment pt1

[novin_ha]

The fact that this was written for me makes me extremely happy. Over the days I have re-read it a number of times and well, each reading filled me with joy. This went into my canon straight away and I cannot unsee it now, can I

comment pt2

[novin_ha]

4. The manipulation.

I enjoyed the way in which you presented the warfare between the manipulative beings. Castiel’s deception, so self-righteous. And quite simply, I loved the “there is a seal-there is no seal” thing. Sort of awesome.

The sentence about paths and demons? *_____*

The entire plot fits so nicely into canon, making it more consistent, actually, and certainly more interesting. And the ending is sort of angst-y ;_;

5. The Theology

<3 You know how much I love yours. The angels and demons in your story are fascinating and fleshed out. The whole paragraph with Uriel is pure genius - there’s humour there, and it’s fun. And it’s always a bit… weird to read about God in fanfiction, but you pull it off perfectly well, so much that I wouldn’t have been offended by the story on the religious level even years ago, when I still had the faculty to be offended

[le_mru]

I think I might have pulled something while reading this.

If there's a storm tonight in your hometown don't run to me for help. I'm going to hell for other reasons.

Other than that, a surprisingly strong characterisation of Castiel. Very interesting. A nice arrogant Ruby :D It all fits very well into canon. And there was spanking.

So long as we may very well not see each other ever again.

[girlupnorth]

Yay :D I'm very glad you enjoyed.

We'll def. meet again. I'm too mean to be killed.

[marycontraire]

This thing I have for Castiel/Ruby just keeps growing and growing. Consider yourself partially responsible.

[girlupnorth]

I understand, Castiel/Ruby almost makes too much sense in my head :)

Thanks for the comment!

[cordeliadelayne]

I really enjoyed this - I love the way you write Ruby and how you weaved canon into it.

[girlupnorth]

Thank you! I'm very glad that you liked this :)

[theonlytwin]

ANGEL. SPANKING.
hell yeah.
i love it like burning. the new!ruby had seemed kind of plastic up until the past two episodes, and this is a beautiful fleshing out.
and castiel is just, well Dwelling in a human body has more impact over his behaviour than Castiel would have supposed; then again, it would be an outright lie to attribute the night he spent with the demon to human body's impulses only. may i say woooo! to human impulses and double woooo! to the fact that angels have impulses too?
wwwwwwwwwwwwoooooooooooooo!

[girlupnorth]

Thank you! Writing (and figuring out) Ruby was a lot of fun, so I'm very glad that you liked her.
And of course angels have impulses - that's what makes the world go round ;)