Fic: The reign of fluff [Avatar: the Last Airbender] [1/5]

[girlupnorth]

Author: girlupnorth
Title: The reign of fluff
Fandom: Avatar: the Last Airbender
Spoilers: Post-series
Rating: NC-17 for porn
Length: ~4.740 words in this part

Contains: pregnancies. Fluff. Crack. Marital sexuashun of f/f, m/f, and m/f/f variety. Marital sexuashun while (very) pregnant. Threesome(s). (Veiled) allusions to incest. More fluff.

Comments

[novin_ha]

I love the word "grumbling" when used for Asian males. And all it entails.

Also, I will at some point not being today leave you a proper review because I love, love, love this fic with all my fluffy heart.

♥

And the watery sexuashun is like, the most epic sexual act ever. If you ever get a magical power, I demand that you choose waterbending.

[girlupnorth]

Heee.

Shall remind you about the review ;*

[pellamerethiel]

How awesome *__* I loved every single word and scene of this fic - Zuko being Zuko, girls being girls and omg yay, tiny babies on the way! Zuko's freaking out! Letters from home, especially the one from uncle Iroh :DDD Waterbending sex-threesome scene - AWESOME. I could so easily imagine every moment which you've created and I'm surprised by the discovery that I had no problem with such amounts of fluff, in fact I pretty enjoyed it ;D

And your Sokka and his babies and his threesome - fantastic XD

EPIC. WANTS MORE.

Mai nodded, and placed Katara’s hand on her flat stomach, her other hand mirroring the gesture on Katara’s own belly. “Do you think we are pregnant?” she asked.
Heee, wonderful :D

“Zuko will freak out.”

“He will absolutely freak out.”
Yeah, he totally will.

“You are very cute when you’re being all dramatic,” Mai said in a voice that, despite it revealing no apparent emotion, Zuko had long decided to consider her most tender.
MAI *___*

“It is perfectly alright for pregnant women to have sex,” Katara said. “Especially

[girlupnorth]

:) Czekam na choć krótki komentarz :D

[girlupnorth]

:)) Bardzo się cieszę, że Ci się podobało :D

BABIES *____* *doświadcza od jakiegoś czasu skrętu jajników na samą myśl o dzieciach*

Wieeeem *____*

Następna część Będzie. Soon-ish.

[galianoir]

Threesomes! Many, many threesomes!

Zuko would definitely freaked out. Well written. Your descriptions of Mai’s voice were wonderful.

I liked family reactions, a specially Mai’s mother’s letter.

And srsly Katara’a father/Bato?

Will there be twins?

[girlupnorth]

Twins, as in either Mai or Katara having two kids at once, or a double birth on the same day? ;) Either way, you'll see :D

[galianoir]

I thought omre about four kids alltogether

[girlupnorth]

I think that Zuko would have had a heart attack on the spot! XD

[novin_ha]

To be honest, I find it difficult to comment on your fics sometimes, because of being so involved in the process ;) I watch them as they grow, they are too close to me!

I love a lot about this first chapter - I love the tenderness of the threesome's relationship, and how you show it continually as loving and kind. I love the comedy of Zuko-the-Drama-Queen and Mai-the-Dry-Wit, but also of Katara-I'm-Dealing-With-Idiots-Again-But-I-Love-Them-So-Will-Let-It-Slide ;) and perhaps most of all, I love the secondary characters (or rather, your way of writing them). Ozai makes for some exquisite comedic material, doesn't he. And I love all the world-building that has gone into this, the detail and the characterisations and the secondary ships. It's adorable.

Aang's absence doesn't hurt.

“Nobody will suspect a waterbender to have created a storm,” Sokka agreed pleasantly. “Dad might be inconsolable, though.”AWWWWW. Also, your Sokka sounds like himself, which is a definite plus. YAY