Fic: The reign of fluff [Avatar: the Last Airbender] [2/5]

[girlupnorth]

Author: girlupnorth
Title: The reign of fluff
Fandom: Avatar: the Last Airbender
Spoilers: Post-series
Rating: NC-17 for porn
Length: ~6.740 words in this part

Contains: pregnancies. Fluff. Crack. Marital sexuashun of f/f, m/f, and m/f/f variety. Marital sexuashun while (very) pregnant. Threesome(s). (Veiled) allusions to incest. More fluff.

Comments

[novin_ha]

LET IT ALL OUT.

I love this fic so much! It makes me squirm and it makes me laugh and it is so warm and loving. I adore each and every part, and ZUKO. Oh fuck, your Zuko's adorableness is something else. And Mai! And Katara. <33333333333

Just. Love.

[girlupnorth]

♥

[le_mru]

I identify with Toph. Strongly. That's too much fluff for me to bear XD

I love the way you described the mechanics of a three-person marriage, that's awesome.

But I'm not so sure about the excess of passive voice, it just kinda puts me out the story.

[girlupnorth]

Thanks for the comment! :)

[pellamerethiel]

This chapter is fantastic! :D I loved all the sex scenes and the fact that all characters sound very true and plausible to me :D I especially adore your Mai and Toph, they sound so canonical to me - and uncle Iroh <333 And you've mentioned Azula a couple of times, yay for that! :D I loved also the duel between Zuko and Toph, Sokka's big family and the fact that all/most of the maids in the palace are lesbians. ;DDD Adorable.

The moment in which Mai feels her baby fluttering and Katara listens into herself and hears the baby's heartbeat... awesome. *__*

Very fluffy chapter, but we have also some angst to counterbalance it - would Katara's baby prove to be a firebender? Or waterbender? ;)

Enjoyed reading this whole chapter :D

“Is it just me, or are you treating me like a piece of meat?” he asked.

“It is just you,” Mai assured him.

“But we love you anyway,” Katara said.

“I sure hope so,” Zuko sighed.
Awww! :D Very canon in my opinion ;).

at this hour he needed more time - or at least, bloodbending help from KataraBrilliant idea

[girlupnorth]

I would like to state for the record that the idea behind lesbian maids is that Mai and Katara wouldn't trust straight girls not to molest Zuko, rather than that they find Zuko untrustworthy ;)

Thank you for the comment, very glad you're enjoying :) There will be more of Azula in the chapters to come ;D

[galianoir]

You know how I love first part about patriarchal customs?

Toph was absolutely awesome, she was being herself.

I also enjoyed Katara and Zuko’s “fight” about children bending.

Blodbending - better than viagra.

[girlupnorth]

I thought you might enjoy the patriarchal customs stuff :D

Thanks a lot for your comments :)

[novin_ha]

Wizyty strasznie mi się podobały! Sokka był przeuroczy XD i w ogóle strasznie mnie cieszą te pairingi, jak wiesz. Jeśli idzie o Toph, to oczywiście jest też dość komiczna ;D I Mai's deadpan delivery XD

Seks był uroczy :] W ogóle biedny Zuko, on to musi mieć kondycję jak stąd do Szczecina ;DDDD strasznie lubię też world-building - magię, leczenie, to w jaki sposób to wszystko po swojemu tutaj używasz i o tym nie zapominasz :)

Twój Zuko jest absolutnie moją ukochaną postacią :] Ale Katara i Mai też są rewelacyjne.

COUP D'ETAT. Jestem za. W ogóle podoba mi się ten wątek polityczno-intrygowy (a w Twoim nowszym fiku to już w ogóle :>>>)

“I also had sheltered upbringing,” Mai pointed out. “And I manage to go around not creeping people out every time I open my mouth.”

A to po prostu słyszę XD

Wujek Iroh też jest uroczy, oczywiście. I temat następstwa tronu \o/

I cieszy mnie, że zmieniłaś re: waga ;)))