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Fic: The reign of fluff [Avatar: the Last Airbender] [3/5]

Nov 04, 2010 23:12

Author: girlupnorth
Title: The reign of fluff
Fandom: Avatar: the Last Airbender
Spoilers: Post-series
Rating: NC-17 for porn
Length: ~6.030 words in this part

Contains: pregnancies. Fluff. Crack. Marital sexuashun of f/f, m/f, and m/f/f variety. Marital sexuashun while (very) pregnant. Threesome(s). (Veiled) allusions to incest. More fluff. ( Read more... )

fanfiction: avatar the last airbender, fanfiction, writing

Comments 7

novin_ha November 5 2010, 22:42:10 UTC

I do &heart; the amount of tenderness, the small details of their love and affection. And the funny moments!

Mmm, Fire Lord's fiery letters.

girlupnorth November 10 2010, 22:55:47 UTC

♥

I remember about the longer reviews ;*

pellamerethiel November 7 2010, 21:02:48 UTC

Such a fluffy one *__* (I mean the chapter, obviously. ;D)

I adore how Mai and Katara are spending their time together while Zuko is away - especially the scene with talking about the new clothes when baby finally decided to kick. ;) And Katara and Mai discussing the topic of ascendancy - I can't wait to see Zuko's reaction to THE PLAN.

Bato and Hakoda - srsly XDDD

The letter the girls have been writing to Zuko - ADORABLE :D

I really enjoy reading your story ;)

girlupnorth November 10 2010, 22:54:56 UTC

Heee.

Although I'm afraid some of the stuff you might be anticipating is happening off-screen ;_; But the next chapter has A LOT OF AZULA!!!!

Thank you for faithful commenting ♥

galianoir November 10 2010, 21:52:04 UTC

I especially liked choosing new clothes scene and the girls talk about ascendancy. No jealousy, great!

Zuko freaking out without his wives and counselors, who wail for returning to palace.

I also liked Hakoda and Bato visit. Disliking Zuko seems so natural for him.

It’s a pity we didn’t get description of Zuko’s visit at his in-lows.

girlupnorth November 10 2010, 22:53:37 UTC

Well, they aren't really rivals (either for Zuko's affections, or for the political power), and they consider both children *theirs*, so there's no need for jealousy :)

It's a bit of a cliche with Hakoda disliking his son-in-law, but I don't think this one's particularly unrealistic, so ;)

Once again, thank you for the comments :)

novin_ha December 16 2010, 11:23:06 UTC

“You know, his coming did reveal that they were still having sex.”

I did laugh out loud here

“You’re not going to freak out, are you?” she inquired matter-of-factly.

“No!” Zuko asserted with force. “Maybe?” he added in a far less certain manner.
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Beloved husband, they began. We miss you. We keep thinking about your sexy, sexy body.LOLOL ( ... )