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Right Here 7/12

Apr 06, 2011 11:09

TITLE: Right Here
AUTHOR: giveitupjessica
PAIRING: MinKey, JongYu, YoungTae, broken!OnKey, JongTae, InaDay
GENRE: romance, comedy, smut, blah blah blah
RATING: G-NC17 (depending on the chapter)
SUMMARY: I’m the one you kiss in the morning. I’ll send you out to the world with my loving. I ain’t gonna trip ‘cause you always gonna keep it right here.
A/N: Sorry this ( Read more... )

right here, inaday, youngtae, minkey, jongyu, rating: pg

Comments 16

a_life_defiant April 7 2011, 04:55:09 UTC

“You as well,” he grabs my hand and shakes it, “Well besides coming over here and waking you two up, we also-”

“I MADE BREAKIE FOR YOU YOUNGIE!” Yoogeun cuts off his appa.

“Yoogeun,” Minho gives the child in his arm a soft shake

OMO, I just wanna gobble Yoogeun up!!! *squishes*

“Thanks,” I start to add both to make my coffee just the way I like it, “Anything else happen?”

translation: When I leave, will I be doing the walk of shame?

“You sure about that?” he winks at me and my cheeks get even hotter.

“I’m sorry I didn’t catch you name,” I say in hopes of changing the subject.

“That’s because I didn’t throw it,” he gives a laugh, “I’m Taemin, Youngwon’s friend and math tutor.”

“Are you now?” I ask and it’s my turn to wink at him.

this exchange = WIN

I lean forward and just barely brush my lips with his, “I like you Hoho.”

He smiles at me and leans down, brushing his lips against mine once again, “I like you too Kim Bap.”

ADORBS!! ^^

“I like you too Youngwon-ssi,” he says when he pulls away ( ... )

4rtemi5 April 7 2011, 10:11:26 UTC

HOHO & KIM BAP COUPLE XDDDDD

YAY finally minkey and youngtae together!!!

loveeeee it....update soon ;)

bopeep_achu April 7 2011, 12:35:02 UTC

Freaking cute this chapter!!!
Everryone is liking everryone again...

kaybee38 April 8 2011, 02:16:00 UTC

This chapter was really sweet! From Yooguennie waking everyone up, to Taemin's reaction to the children, and Key picking up on the "boyfriend" comment. I loved how the kids were watching when Key and Minho kissed too. I was wondering if Key and Taemin would know each other, and then I realized that it was their exes who got together. As usual Minho is such a good appa! Youngwon WHY would you run away from Tae? I like how it ended though.

kaybee38 April 8 2011, 02:16:48 UTC

Oh and "breakie" is adorbs. I think I'm calling it that from now on!

itzsoapie April 10 2011, 05:32:33 UTC

AHHHHH :D OMG OMMMMG. -spazzes-

SO ADORABLLLEEE. Yoogeun is just the brightest bubbliest ball of sunshine EVERRR.

:D And Key and Minho got togetherrr~ and Youngwon and Taeminnie tooooo~ WOOOO. LETS GET IT ON NOW. D< Lol.