Strut

[gixi]

Title: Strut

Comments

[sparklebutch]

Woah, very good. I liked it a lot. I love Jayne's slow reaction, it's rarely done in fic and makes a lot more sense than jumping merrily into bed with people, know what I mean?

[anxiety_junkie]

This is terrific! Your Jayne voice is great; just ignorant enough without making him a commplete idiot, which some writers tend to do; and not schmoopy or romantic at all, which Jayne never would be.

Oh yeah, and the smut is hot, too. *g*

I hope to see more J/S from you - there just isn't enough out there!

[merle_p]

Oh, hot!

[apsik]

Interesting fic - that's kinda like jayne to see all the differences: core/border, core-bred/border smarts, and so on :)

thanks for sharing :)

[ana_grrl]

Very hot, and I love Jayne's voice in this!