That was fantastic! Twisted and sexy. I really liked the way it all unfolded.
two little mistakes - in the third to last section, you have "they eventually would up" where I think you meant wound, and "he felt asleep" instead of fell.
Thanks for pointing those out! I... I really should use a beta more often. I always miss things like that. (As a matter of fact, I just nearly posted this comment with "tht" instead of "that.")
I think I agree with an earlier comment. Holy Crap.....or something to that effect. lol.
This fic is a total win. I like the whole idea of this, very nice. I'm not one really for slashing the SAME character but it's not really Tony/TONY, it's more like Tony/ the dude that plays the dude disguised as another dude. With that, a little more of Kirks personal issues would have been insightful...*cough cough* sequel? o.o
ANYWAY, I love. Thank you for sharing :3 it was very sexy.
OMG THIS IS MADE OF SOOOOO MUCH FUCKIN' WIN. O.O DAYUM.
sorry if I spazzed out and went all caps, but shit, it was only a matter of time before someone did a Tony/Kirk and dammint...that was freaking amazing.
I'm still trying to mop up the puddle I've become....
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two little mistakes - in the third to last section, you have "they eventually would up" where I think you meant wound, and "he felt asleep" instead of fell.
Other than that, flawless - in many ways :)
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I'm glad you liked it! <3
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This fic is a total win. I like the whole idea of this, very nice. I'm not one really for slashing the SAME character but it's not really Tony/TONY, it's more like Tony/ the dude that plays the dude disguised as another dude. With that, a little more of Kirks personal issues would have been insightful...*cough cough* sequel? o.o
ANYWAY, I love. Thank you for sharing :3 it was very sexy.
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DAYUM.
sorry if I spazzed out and went all caps, but shit, it was only a matter of time before someone did a Tony/Kirk and dammint...that was freaking amazing.
I'm still trying to mop up the puddle I've become....
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