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Sierra Echo X-Ray

Sep 07, 2008 15:56

Title: Sierra Echo X-Ray ( Read more... )

live free or die hard, john/matt, rating: nc-17

Comments 19

xela_fic September 8 2008, 03:07:28 UTC

I like this look at how Matt dealt with the fallout of the Fire Sale. Wonderfully constructed. THanks!

cpwatcher September 8 2008, 03:51:09 UTC

Very nicely done. I can see Matt being a little over the top after the fire sale. And even the glimpses of McClane, as seen through Matt's eyes was good.

liasta September 8 2008, 05:36:27 UTC

Hotel Oscar Tango! Um what can I say aside from Wow, this was smoking.

rekindle956 September 8 2008, 06:21:23 UTC

Real nice, thank you.

iniq September 8 2008, 07:05:15 UTC

Wow.
This is genius! The take you have on them is so very different and new and refreshing. Absolutely gorgoeus. I also really like your use of repetition. And the dialog and characterizations... well ace. :D