"District X" Sneak Peek

[gjjdevlin]

Taken from District X #1: "Every Night is Another Story", Part I: Playing with Fire. With the introduction of the series going live tomorrow I decided to put up this little "sneak peek" for anyone who might be interested.

11th Precinct
Manhattan, New York

Walking away wasn't the problem, facing what was behind him was the hard part or so he had

Comments

[mimick]

I saw two typos in your preview that need fixed.

[gjjdevlin]

That's for the editor to do. I just write the story and try to make sure it doesn't get entirely screwed.

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[mimick]

It helps the editor if you can make the story the best it can be before they proofread it. You send in issues like Ben Hobson, and you look like a rank amatuer clown. You send in stories that are the best you can do, ones you have looked over yourself before handing it off. Then you come off more professional.

Other than that, your story looked very good. Good luck with the debut of your title :)

[gjjdevlin]

I do proofread. The excerpt above was not copied and pasted from word, it was retyped to avoid the weird distortions to the text. There may well be typos from that, I assure you though that the issue does not include them.

I thank you for taking the time to read it and for the luck.

(:

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