The View: salvadore_hart

Jun 03, 2011 00:27

Title: Let's Play Robbers & Live on the Lamb
Author: salvadore-hart
Rating: R
Characters: Gabe Garza, James Chaffin, Evan “Q-Tip” Stafford
Word Count: 2118
Summary: If it takes shit to feel bliss, then I feel pretty blissfully.
Warnings: Glorification of criminal activity, I suppose, in an O Brother Where Art Thou? fashion. Racial slurs spoken by Chaffin (that ( Read more... )

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nightanddaze June 11 2011, 16:46:54 UTC
Oh man, oh man. When I saw "future!world dystopia" I got so excited. And for such good reason! This is awesome awesome awesome! And has prison!!

The language you use is great and really carries the prison idea excellently and I was/am so psyched about a prison breakout of all things.

Just, oh man. Hearts in my eyes. So awesome!

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salvadore_hart June 14 2011, 21:00:45 UTC
Thank you so much! I don't even know, when I was listening to "The View" I just pictured the getaway scene in O' Brother Where Are Art Thou? and then this was what was written...? In my head Rudy & Pappy run a rebel unit and Q-Tip & Christeson join the revolution (oh, and Walt & Ray are mechanics who the boys steal a truck from...)

Long story short, if this weren't a pinch-hit it would be longer, but I'm glad you like it how it is!

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pommederis June 15 2011, 05:48:31 UTC
This was neat. There's always room for future dystopia fic!

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_steelphoenix_ June 17 2011, 02:29:47 UTC
Ah, man, this awesome! Love the dynamics of the boys, and the dystopian-future thing is well-handled. :)

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puckling June 17 2011, 06:59:29 UTC
This is absolutely brilliant. I love what you've done here with characters who usually don't get enough facetime in fics and how you've sketched out this entire verse that's not detail heavy but is really atmospheric and wonderful, fitting the story you want to tell exactly.

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delurker June 19 2011, 06:34:06 UTC
I really love this!

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