Oh, I quite liked this - especially all the meta-bits where Neil and Terry are only prophets when they write together and all that. And your Golem voice was excellent, I loved his intractable logic and persistence.
You left me wanting more, but that's not a bad thing. Great job.
Oh, good, I was hoping somebody would like that! I love the meta that Chuck (and his fandom, and prophets in general) introduced in the show, and think they should be taken advantage of more often in fic. As for the golem, I liked working with a character so absolute - it was a bit like how I see non-AI robots, which led to the comparison Castiel made in-fic.
I definitely want to write more in the context of this story - more with SPN characters interacting with Aziraphale and Adam in particular. I guess I'll see what comes to me.
Thanks a lot for reading, and for the feedback! I really appreciate knowing what works for people.
A very enjoyable story! Loved you making Terry and Neil prophets when working together - that was a nice touch. Laughed at Dean expecting England to be 'more foreign'. The golem was well realised too. Well done! And thanks for sharing your story with us.
Thanks! Authors being prophets is one of my favorite developments in the show, and I thought it only appropriate to extend it to Good Omens as well.
I know from personal experience that never traveling outside your native country leaves you with a lot of expectations when you finally travel - I saw no reason Dean should be exempt from that expectation.
I'm glad the golem worked for you, and that you took the time to give me some feedback - I always appreciate that.
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You left me wanting more, but that's not a bad thing. Great job.
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I definitely want to write more in the context of this story - more with SPN characters interacting with Aziraphale and Adam in particular. I guess I'll see what comes to me.
Thanks a lot for reading, and for the feedback! I really appreciate knowing what works for people.
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I know from personal experience that never traveling outside your native country leaves you with a lot of expectations when you finally travel - I saw no reason Dean should be exempt from that expectation.
I'm glad the golem worked for you, and that you took the time to give me some feedback - I always appreciate that.
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